So, I have a poem pretty much complete, it's just that I need to find a couple of lines that fit the lines after it. The part I need help with is where the red lines are...
Blind Date
I cannot see.
my tears: rain
I cannot hear.
my heart beat: thunder
I cannot feel.
the chills up my spine: lightning
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my sweat rising to the top layer of my skin: dew
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fear flooding my body: overflowing river
I cannot breathe.
my rapid breathes: panting dog
I cannot run.
my legs: dead weight
I cannot scream.
my voice: a silent movie
I cannot fight it.
my strength: an unfinished sentence
I cannot break away.
my freedom: an untold story
Anything you could help me with would be AWESOME